It makes me sad to see others hurting and alone
I wish I could make you believe it’s ok, you don’t have to do it on your own
But we all build walls around us, we think it keeps us safe
But walls also keep things in and others out, it’s such a waste
We miss many opportunities to connect with one another
You don’t have to be born of blood to be a sister or a brother
If we share our stories unburden our pain
Each others trust and friendship we gain
But walls are all around us, keep us tightly locked away
We whittle away the years, avoiding what we dare not say
So maybe it’s something to consider, something of which to think
Next time you’re feeling all alone and desperate, on the brink
Pull down a few bricks and male a hole for others to peek through
Then we can really help each other, so let the world see you
I know it takes a little trust and sometimes trust is sparse
But we have more in common than you think, all you have to do is ask
There’s no point feeling isolated, feeling all alone
When we can help each other, to make a place that’s home
Thank you for such a wonderful piece of work!
Thank you for all your encouragement and likes, I DO notice and it means a lot 🙂
you are welcome.
your work earns those likes.
I dont like a lot of stuff any more.
Your writing speaks to me
I’m so glad, it means so much to me to touch even just one person out there. Your kindness is greatly appreciated, thanks for the support.
Beautiful sentiments, expressed with a singular compassion that is very refreshing.
Wow thanks so much, that’s so kind of you to say. So encouraging 🙂
Thank you for this – you are very visual and empathetic. The world needs to hear more from Empaths!
Thanks for your feedback, it’s lovely. I’m just trying to break down walls and create a community online of people who can be open with each other about our struggles 🙂
What a beautiful poem! Those words and the idea behind those words are really inspirational and they have a way of reaching through the computer and speaking to me. I think you have amazing talent 🙂 Keep it up!
And what a beautiful thing to say, thank you so much. It means a lot to me, I just want us all to find a bit of peace through sharing our pain and stories together 🙂
Very beautiful and true, well done! 🙂
Thank you kindly, very nice of you to say 🙂
Thanks for that post sis. It really is encouraging, just as you always are.
Aww I’m so glad!! You’re awesome bro 🙂